Oracle of Woe
Hector now returns
I am the first to see Him
My heart is crying
The tragedy of Helen's War
I started the war
for my heart yearned for Paris,
but my heart felt sadness for his
body returned home in his
father's arms
POV- vantage point or stance from which a story is told, the eye and mind through which the action is perceived and filtered
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ReplyDeleteI love your titles!
ReplyDeletegreat haiku
good hint fiction - "his" a little unclear of a pn since your only antecedent is Paris.
Hint fiction should "look like" prose:
I started the war, for my heart yearned for Paris, but my heart felt sadness for his body returned home in his father's arms
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